[WG-P3] Opportunity to comment at IGF Future of Privacy Workshop

Susan Landau susan.landau at privacyink.org
Thu Sep 2 23:28:38 EDT 2010


On 9/2/10 4:15 PM, J. Trent Adams wrote:
> Mark -
>
> I agree with the first two changes, but don't think that the use of
> "transparently" in the last suggestion fits.
>
> I get what you're saying, but the following captures the idea more
> effectively:
>    
I'm happy with that.  Thanks Mark and Trent.

Susan
> -----
> The Kantara Initiative Privacy&   Public Policy Work Group (P3WG)
> believes that it is important to support the open development of
> globally-applicable privacy standards, both technical and regulatory, in
> order to continue having confidence in the Internet ecosystem.  To do
> so, the P3WG actively engages with individuals, enterprises, policymakers,
> regulators and adoption communities on best practices and common
> solutions.  Fundamental to effective privacy are transparent
> architectures that secure
> private information and enable information-sharing in a secure,
> privacy-enhancing manner.  Only by multi-stakeholder collaboration will
> viable solutions emerge, be deployed, and maintained.
> -----
>
> Does that work?
>
> - Trent
>
>
> Mark Lizar wrote:
>    
>>   I suggest a changed of 3 words, I have bolded these new words below.
>>
>> - M
>> On 2 Sep 2010, at 19:13, J. Trent Adams wrote:
>>
>>      
>>> All -
>>>
>>> Taking Susan's input into account, here is the updated statement for the
>>> IGF:
>>>
>>> -----
>>> The Kantara Initiative Privacy&   Public Policy Work Group (P3WG)
>>> believes that it is important to support the open development of
>>> globally-applicable privacy standards, both technical and regulatory, in
>>> order to continue having confidence in the Internet ecosystem.  To do
>>> so, the P3WG actively engages with *individuals*, enterprises,
>>> policymakers,
>>> regulators and adoption communities on best practices and common
>>> solutions.  Fundamental to *effective* privacy are architectures that
>>> *transparently* secure
>>> private information and enable information-sharing in a secure,
>>> privacy-enhancing manner.  Only by multi-stakeholder collaboration will
>>> viable solutions emerge, be deployed, and maintained.
>>> -----
>>>
>>> If there are no further suggestions, I'll circulate this text as a
>>> formal motion in a separate electronic ballot later today.
>>>
>>> Thanks,
>>> Trent
>>>
>>>
>>> Susan Landau wrote:
>>>        
>>>> Trent,
>>>>
>>>> I like the approach, and vote B.   Proposed edits below.  Glad
>>>> you'll be
>>>> doing this.
>>>>
>>>> Best,
>>>>
>>>> Susan
>>>>
>>>> On 8/31/10 12:54 PM, J. Trent Adams wrote:
>>>>
>>>>          
>>>>> Assuming that this group would like to take advantage of this
>>>>> opportunity to be heard at the IGF, I'd like to propose the following
>>>>> statement:
>>>>>
>>>>> -----
>>>>> The Kantara Initiative Privacy&   Public Policy Work Group (P3WG)
>>>>> believes that it is important to support the open development of
>>>>> globally-applicable privacy standards, both technical and
>>>>> regulatory, in
>>>>> order to continue having confidence in the Internet ecosystem.  To do
>>>>> so, the P3WG actively engages with users, enterprises, policymakers,
>>>>> regulators and adoption communities on best practices and common
>>>>> solutions.  Privacy is a necessity for healthy online interactions, and
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>            
>>>> Suggest replacing "Privacy ... only" by:
>>>>
>>>> Fundamental to good privacy are architectures that secure private
>>>> information and
>>>> enable information information-sharing in a secure,
>>>> privacy-enhancing manner.  Only
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>          
>>>>> only by multi-stakeholder collaboration will viable solutions
>>>>> emerge, be
>>>>> deployed, and maintained.
>>>>> -----
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>            
>>>> so that the whole thing now reads:
>>>>
>>>> The Kantara Initiative Privacy&   Public Policy Work Group (P3WG)
>>>> believes that it is important to support the open development of
>>>> globally-applicable privacy standards, both technical and regulatory, in
>>>> order to continue having confidence in the Internet ecosystem.  To do
>>>> so, the P3WG actively engages with users, enterprises, policymakers,
>>>> regulators and adoption communities on best practices and common
>>>> solutions.  Fundamental to good privacy are architectures that
>>>> secure private information and
>>>> enable information information-sharing in a secure,
>>>> privacy-enhancing manner.
>>>> Only by multi-stakeholder collaboration will viable solutions emerge, be
>>>> deployed, and maintained.
>>>>
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>>>>          
>>> -- 
>>> J. Trent Adams
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>>>
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