[WG-P3] Opportunity to comment at IGF Future of Privacy Workshop

J. Trent Adams adams at isoc.org
Thu Sep 2 16:15:01 EDT 2010


Mark -

I agree with the first two changes, but don't think that the use of
"transparently" in the last suggestion fits.

I get what you're saying, but the following captures the idea more
effectively:

-----
The Kantara Initiative Privacy&  Public Policy Work Group (P3WG)
believes that it is important to support the open development of
globally-applicable privacy standards, both technical and regulatory, in
order to continue having confidence in the Internet ecosystem.  To do
so, the P3WG actively engages with individuals, enterprises, policymakers,
regulators and adoption communities on best practices and common
solutions.  Fundamental to effective privacy are transparent
architectures that secure
private information and enable information-sharing in a secure,
privacy-enhancing manner.  Only by multi-stakeholder collaboration will
viable solutions emerge, be deployed, and maintained.
-----

Does that work?

- Trent


Mark Lizar wrote:
>  I suggest a changed of 3 words, I have bolded these new words below. 
>
> - M
> On 2 Sep 2010, at 19:13, J. Trent Adams wrote:
>
>>
>> All -
>>
>> Taking Susan's input into account, here is the updated statement for the
>> IGF:
>>
>> -----
>> The Kantara Initiative Privacy&  Public Policy Work Group (P3WG)
>> believes that it is important to support the open development of
>> globally-applicable privacy standards, both technical and regulatory, in
>> order to continue having confidence in the Internet ecosystem.  To do
>> so, the P3WG actively engages with *individuals*, enterprises,
>> policymakers,
>> regulators and adoption communities on best practices and common
>> solutions.  Fundamental to *effective* privacy are architectures that
>> *transparently* secure
>> private information and enable information-sharing in a secure,
>> privacy-enhancing manner.  Only by multi-stakeholder collaboration will
>> viable solutions emerge, be deployed, and maintained.
>> -----
>>
>> If there are no further suggestions, I'll circulate this text as a
>> formal motion in a separate electronic ballot later today.
>>
>> Thanks,
>> Trent
>>
>>
>> Susan Landau wrote:
>>> Trent,
>>>
>>> I like the approach, and vote B.   Proposed edits below.  Glad
>>> you'll be
>>> doing this.
>>>
>>> Best,
>>>
>>> Susan
>>>
>>> On 8/31/10 12:54 PM, J. Trent Adams wrote:
>>>
>>>> Assuming that this group would like to take advantage of this
>>>> opportunity to be heard at the IGF, I'd like to propose the following
>>>> statement:
>>>>
>>>> -----
>>>> The Kantara Initiative Privacy&  Public Policy Work Group (P3WG)
>>>> believes that it is important to support the open development of
>>>> globally-applicable privacy standards, both technical and
>>>> regulatory, in
>>>> order to continue having confidence in the Internet ecosystem.  To do
>>>> so, the P3WG actively engages with users, enterprises, policymakers,
>>>> regulators and adoption communities on best practices and common
>>>> solutions.  Privacy is a necessity for healthy online interactions, and
>>>>
>>>>
>>>
>>> Suggest replacing "Privacy ... only" by:
>>>
>>> Fundamental to good privacy are architectures that secure private
>>> information and
>>> enable information information-sharing in a secure,
>>> privacy-enhancing manner.  Only
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>> only by multi-stakeholder collaboration will viable solutions
>>>> emerge, be
>>>> deployed, and maintained.
>>>> -----
>>>>
>>>>
>>> so that the whole thing now reads:
>>>
>>> The Kantara Initiative Privacy&  Public Policy Work Group (P3WG)
>>> believes that it is important to support the open development of
>>> globally-applicable privacy standards, both technical and regulatory, in
>>> order to continue having confidence in the Internet ecosystem.  To do
>>> so, the P3WG actively engages with users, enterprises, policymakers,
>>> regulators and adoption communities on best practices and common
>>> solutions.  Fundamental to good privacy are architectures that
>>> secure private information and
>>> enable information information-sharing in a secure,
>>> privacy-enhancing manner.
>>> Only by multi-stakeholder collaboration will viable solutions emerge, be
>>> deployed, and maintained.
>>>
>>> _______________________________________________
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>>> http://kantarainitiative.org/mailman/listinfo/wg-p3
>>>
>>
>> -- 
>> J. Trent Adams
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>>
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>> Internet Society
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>>
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