<div><div dir="auto"><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)">Andrew,</span></div></div><div dir="auto"><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)"><br></span></div><div dir="auto"><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)">A comments / questions:</span></div><div dir="auto"><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)"><br></span></div><div dir="auto"><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)">1) I’m confused by these words in the Purpose section: “A variety of identifiers appropriate for personal data must be trusted at a wide variety of relying parties and applied </span><span style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px">throughout different profiles</span><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)">. </span><span class="inline-comment-marker" style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px">An Identity ecosystem</span><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)"> requires reliable identity and federations of all sorts, and both highly structured and distributed identities.” To me they don’t add anything but, in my opinion, confusion and I’d recommend deleting them.</span></div><div dir="auto"><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)"><br></span></div><div dir="auto"><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)">2) I don’t find that these words in the Scope section add anything: “</span><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)">to help identity ecosystem participants and individuals with their identity and personal data management”. They duplicate what is said in the Purpose section and, again in my opinion, are out of place. I’d recommend that they be deleted.</span></div><div dir="auto"><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)"><br></span></div><div dir="auto"><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)">3) In the Scope section, I’d suggest that this text: “</span><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)">NOTE: Examples of work to be taken up by the committee are found here: </span><a href="https://kantarainitiative.org/confluence/display/idef/FIRE+WG+Committee+Work+List" style="color:rgb(90,141,147);text-decoration:none;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px">FIRE WG Committee Work List</a><a href="https://kantarainitiative.org/confluence/display/idef/FIRE+WG+Committee+Work+List" rel="nofollow" style="color:rgb(90,141,147);text-decoration:none;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px"> L</a><a href="https://kantarainitiative.org/confluence/display/idef/FIRE+WG+Committee+Work" rel="nofollow" style="color:rgb(90,141,147);text-decoration:none;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px">ist</a><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)"> but a consolidated list is noted below“ be moved to after the bulleted list to improve readability. Where it appears I found it distracting.</span></div><div dir="auto"><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)"><br></span></div><div dir="auto"><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)">4) I’d recommend changing the word “may” to “will” in the Draft Technical Specifications section. That would make the sentence, “</span><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)">The following technical specifications will be developed in 2018-19:” Status reporting can then report on progress including reasons why they have not been developed.</span></div><div dir="auto"><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)"><br></span></div><div dir="auto"><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)">5) Is there a reason the IAWG isn’t in the list of Related Work and Liaisons?</span></div><div dir="auto"><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)"><br></span></div><div dir="auto"><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)">My two cents,</span></div><div dir="auto"><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)">Ken</span></div><div dir="auto"><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)"><br></span></div><div dir="auto"><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)"><br></span></div><div dir="auto"><span style="color:rgb(51,51,51);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)"><br></span></div><div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr">On Mon, Dec 17, 2018 at 8:29 PM Andrew Hughes <<a href="mailto:andrewhughes3000@gmail.com">andrewhughes3000@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr">Hi folks - part of the IDESG that came over to Kantara this summer have been working towards setting up a WG to cover their work on the IDESG Registry system.</div><div dir="ltr"><br></div><div dir="ltr">Please review the draft charter at the link below and send comments back to the list. I hope to run an eBallot before the end of the year.<br><div><br></div><div><a href="https://kantarainitiative.org/confluence/display/idef/Proposed+charter+v2+-+Agile+meeting+version" target="_blank">https://kantarainitiative.org/confluence/display/idef/Proposed+charter+v2+-+Agile+meeting+version</a></div><div><br></div><div>thanks!</div><div>andrew.<br clear="all"><div><div dir="ltr" class="m_2126422844507383658gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr">







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