[KI-LC] ANCR WG Charter

Ken Dagg kendaggtbs at gmail.com
Tue Jan 19 14:45:15 UTC 2021


Changes look good. Ken

On Tue, Jan 19, 2021 at 9:06 AM Colin Wallis Kantara <
colin at kantarainitiative.org> wrote:

> Thanks Sal
>
> Waiting on Ken for any last minute things.
> I did minor edits (complete name of the IPR, got the chart of proposers
> underneath the section heading in Section 11).
>
> I have cc'd in Bella as she is preparing the LC Ballot about now, so
> unless we receive any other updates, my minor update attached is the one
> that will go out with the 7 day LC Ballot.
>
> Cheers
> Colin
>
>
> On Tue, Jan 19, 2021 at 1:44 PM Salvatore DAgostino <sal at idmachines.com>
> wrote:
>
>> Ken,
>>
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>> Thanks for your comments. I took another run through.
>>
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>> Colin, pending other comments, let me know if you need anything else from
>> me.
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>> Thanks to all,
>>
>> Sal
>>
>>
>>
>> *From:* Salvatore DAgostino
>> *Sent:* Monday, January 18, 2021 9:21 AM
>> *To:* Ken Dagg <kendaggtbs at gmail.com>; jim kragh <kragh65 at gmail.com>
>> *Cc:* Andrew Hughes (andrewhughes3000 at gmail.com) <
>> andrewhughes3000 at gmail.com>; Colin Wallis <colin at kantarainitiative.org>;
>> Eve Maler <eve at xmlgrrl.com>; Kantara Leadership Council <
>> lc at kantarainitiative.org>; Mark Lizar <mark at openconsent.com>; Thomas
>> Sullivan <tsullivan at drfirst.com>; jim pasquale <jimpasquale at gmail.com>
>> *Subject:* RE: ANCR WG Charter
>>
>>
>>
>> Thanks Ken,
>>
>>
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>> I will go through it and provide an update later today.
>>
>>
>>
>> Yes, the language is changing here and we need to be very clear as that
>> is directly to the point of the work, thanks for your reading.
>>
>>
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>> The data and human vocabularies are part of the challenge. As we said,
>> part of the problem is that a consent receipt conflated notice, consent,
>> legal basis and other things.
>>
>>
>>
>> Thanks again,
>>
>>
>>
>> Sal
>>
>>
>>
>> *From:* Ken Dagg <kendaggtbs at gmail.com>
>> *Sent:* Monday, January 18, 2021 9:11 AM
>> *To:* jim kragh <kragh65 at gmail.com>
>> *Cc:* Andrew Hughes (andrewhughes3000 at gmail.com) <
>> andrewhughes3000 at gmail.com>; Colin Wallis <colin at kantarainitiative.org>;
>> Eve Maler <eve at xmlgrrl.com>; Kantara Leadership Council <
>> lc at kantarainitiative.org>; Mark Lizar <mark at openconsent.com>; Salvatore
>> DAgostino <sal at idmachines.com>; Thomas Sullivan <tsullivan at drfirst.com>;
>> jim pasquale <jimpasquale at gmail.com>
>> *Subject:* Re: ANCR WG Charter
>>
>>
>>
>> Sal,
>>
>>
>>
>> I read the charter on Friday and thought about my comments over the
>> weekend.
>>
>>
>>
>> I’m not familiar with the Consent Receipt work. That being said, from my
>> uneducated perspective, I have the following comments:
>>
>>
>>
>> 1) I find the charter unclear in several places in terms of wording.  For
>> example, in section 3 Scope:
>>
>> a) paragraph 1. a. says, “Update the initial consent receipt by
>> specifying ...”.  IMO, it should say, “ Update the initial consent receipt
>> *specification* by specifying ...”. There are other cases of
>> inconsistent wording. I would suggest giving the charter an overall read to
>> ensure clarity.
>>
>> b) paragraph 1. b. say to the “Extend the consent notice receipt schema
>> base”. I have no idea what a “consent notice receipt” is let alone it’s
>> “scheme base”.  I could not find the term in V1.1.
>>
>> c) paragraph 1. c. says “Address technical gaps”. My question is:
>> technical gaps in what?
>>
>>
>>
>> 2) In section 4 Draft Technical Specifications I’m not sure what what is
>> being developed especially how the first and second bullet relate to each
>> other. From what is said, I think that there is some overlap between the
>> two bullets.
>>
>>
>>
>> 3) IMO, section 7 Audience is still unclear and doesn’t describe what
>> they will get out of it or how they will use it.
>>
>>
>>
>> 4) IMO, section 8 Duration describes another output from the Group: the
>> roadmap for future work.
>>
>>
>>
>> As I said at the beginning, I thought about whether I should send these
>> comments and finally decide to in order to ensure that the charter clearly
>> describes what the group intends to do.
>>
>>
>>
>> Ken
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>> On Mon, Jan 18, 2021 at 8:53 AM jim kragh <kragh65 at gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>> Good morning to all!
>>
>>
>>
>> Sal, I sent my approval in last Friday and encourage my colleagues to do
>> the same today. I found one typo in the document which I brought to Sal's
>> attention and it was being corrected.
>>
>>
>>
>> Have a good day!
>>
>>
>>
>> Jim Kragh
>>
>> Chair
>>
>> FIRE WG
>>
>>
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>> On Mon, Jan 18, 2021, 8:30 AM Salvatore DAgostino <sal at idmachines.com>
>> wrote:
>>
>> Happy MLK Day!
>>
>> Can you please take the quick action to approve the WG, (we discussed this
>> in the leads call and it has been through multiple update based on
>> comments)so that we can put out an e-ballot tomorrow?
>>
>> Thanks,
>>
>> Sal
>>
>>
>>
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