[KI-LC] ANCR WG Charter
kendaggtbs at gmail.com
Mon Jan 18 14:11:05 UTC 2021
I read the charter on Friday and thought about my comments over the weekend.
I’m not familiar with the Consent Receipt work. That being said, from my
uneducated perspective, I have the following comments:
1) I find the charter unclear in several places in terms of wording. For
example, in section 3 Scope:
a) paragraph 1. a. says, “Update the initial consent receipt by specifying
...”. IMO, it should say, “ Update the initial consent receipt
*specification* by specifying ...”. There are other cases of inconsistent
wording. I would suggest giving the charter an overall read to ensure
b) paragraph 1. b. say to the “Extend the consent notice receipt schema
base”. I have no idea what a “consent notice receipt” is let alone it’s
“scheme base”. I could not find the term in V1.1.
c) paragraph 1. c. says “Address technical gaps”. My question is: technical
gaps in what?
2) In section 4 Draft Technical Specifications I’m not sure what what is
being developed especially how the first and second bullet relate to each
other. From what is said, I think that there is some overlap between the
3) IMO, section 7 Audience is still unclear and doesn’t describe what they
will get out of it or how they will use it.
4) IMO, section 8 Duration describes another output from the Group: the
roadmap for future work.
As I said at the beginning, I thought about whether I should send these
comments and finally decide to in order to ensure that the charter clearly
describes what the group intends to do.
On Mon, Jan 18, 2021 at 8:53 AM jim kragh <kragh65 at gmail.com> wrote:
> Good morning to all!
> Sal, I sent my approval in last Friday and encourage my colleagues to do
> the same today. I found one typo in the document which I brought to Sal's
> attention and it was being corrected.
> Have a good day!
> Jim Kragh
> FIRE WG
> On Mon, Jan 18, 2021, 8:30 AM Salvatore DAgostino <sal at idmachines.com>
>> Happy MLK Day!
>> Can you please take the quick action to approve the WG, (we discussed this
>> in the leads call and it has been through multiple update based on
>> comments)so that we can put out an e-ballot tomorrow?
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