[KI-LC] Kantara Flyer refresh: Comments invited.

Ken Dagg kendaggtbs at gmail.com
Wed Aug 8 21:52:55 UTC 2018


A few suggestions that I believe will improve the readability of the flyer.

- Is there a way to make “OAuth 2” appear on the same line. To me it looks
funny to be split across two lines.

- Was this sentence in the previous version: “Nurture emerging technical
communities through our discussion groups and work sessions”? Is there a
reason that we’re referring to “work sessions” rather than “work groups”?

- I personally find this sentence awkward: “Companies all over the world
are providing high quality credentials to their customers because of their
approved status with Kantara’s Identity Assurance Program.” I’d suggest the
following instead: “Companies all over the world are able to provide high
quality credentials to their customers because they have been approved by
Kantara’s Identity Assurance Program.”

- Should the “accredits” in this sentence be capitalized: “Kantara approves
Credential Service Providers (CSPs) and Accredits Assessors.”?

- I’d suggest the following: “In addition to its ‘Classic’ Trust Mark,
Kantara is the only Trust Framework Provider able to grant CSPs the
NIST800-63 rev. 3 and NIST 800-63 (Technical) Trust Marks.”

- I’d suggest italicizing this phrase “applied R&D for the community
public-good”. It took me several tries to understand the sentence in which
it appears.

- Can I suggest: “Collaborate with peers transparently and equitably in
an open consensus-based environment” to highlight the consensus.

My thoughts,

On Wed, Aug 8, 2018 at 2:19 PM Colin Wallis Kantara <
colin at kantarainitiative.org> wrote:

> Folks
> A few months ago I asked for and received comments from you for the next
> revision of the Kantara 2 sided Flyer.
> A number of subtle text and image changes were made.
> In particular I note the changed text for UMA and Consent Receipt (tho'
> the CR text might need to be changed again).
> I think we could also add in the (stop-gap) IDEF logo mark near the
> Kantara mark, to create a better relationship between that text and the
> mark.
> I welcome your thoughts.
> Cheers
> Colin
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